The first thing I did was change the pictures of the boys. Since the layout is about the bunny I kept that picture. Next, while not pastel colors, I picked a kit that had a more masculine feel to it while still embracing the spirit of the holiday. Darker purples, sea greens, sand and just a touch of pink. A felt like title put more emphasis on what the layout is about. I also kept the original poem, spacing it out a little differently this time. All in all I think I really like the new layout better.
Fonts: Bubbleboddy; Calibri